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Title: Into Blue
Post by: Steve Hydonus on Jan 20, 2016 08:01 pm
Have a question these r some of shannon words;

Loving Him is Like That

Have you ever slept next to an ocean - 
Felt the breatheless awe 
of unending space
So close to your beating heart?

Loving Him is like that - 

Waking, soaring with gulls 
Knowing the day will be special 
For having slept near something so

Vast
Rhymthic
Comforing

And beautifully unfathomable.




These were written by Bruce Manaka and myself for a song we collaborated on.;

Rivers flow to the sea 
Into blue into blue 
The waves have gone to the sea 
Into blue into blue 
the dawn has come to lift the Sun 
into blue into blue 

like the trees that give me shelter 
the stars that lite the way 
I know that your beside me 
like a child that's gone astray
I feel your love
protecting me
All the way

Breathe on to me your life and your love 
your joy and your laughter 
as light as the breeze 
the song of the ocean 
the sigh of the devotion 
Into blue into blue 

wonder if our song was wrote this way;

Rivers flow to the sea 
Into blue into blue 
The waves have gone to the sea 
Into blue into blue 
the dawn has come to lift the Sun 
into blue into blue 

Have you ever slept near an ocean - 
Felt the breatheless awe 
of unending space
Close to your beating heart?



Title: Re: Into Blue
Post by: Steve Hydonus on Jan 27, 2016 01:24 pm
Shannon Leigh;

Worked on this a bit... with our combined poetry for the song....


Into Blue


Rivers flow to the sea
Into blue into blue
The waves have gone to the sea
Into blue into blue
the dawn has come to lift the Sun
into blue into blue

The wind whips off the waves
as we sleep beside an ocean
within your heart awakens
breathless and in awe .......
Sunrays,
thru misty,
morning fog

Breathe into me
the sound of the sea
to be in a place
of unending space
Charging emotion
With sighs of devotion

Into blue into blue

Copyrighted


Title: Re: Into Blue
Post by: Shannon on Jan 27, 2016 04:43 pm
It's beautiful. Would love to hear the music.


Title: Re: Into Blue
Post by: Steve Hydonus on Jan 27, 2016 04:59 pm
It's beautiful. Would love to hear the music.

Sometimes...like us songs... go thru... perpetual transformations before finding rest for something else to arise. Then somewhat like a volcano someone comes along like you and they erupt again and take on a different form. People and circumstances do that to you in life as well. We always have to b receptive and aware of the chemical combinations that change our life, music and art.